Every great story is in actuality
comprised of two intertwining stories, the A Story and the B Story. The A Story
is external, or the obvious physical actions happening outside the protagonist
as they journey along. The B Story is internal, or the obscure (obscure at
least at the beginning of the story though it becomes clear and evident by
story's end) emotional underpinnings happening inside the protagonist while
they endure through the necessary adversity of their plot.
If I told you plucky
farm boy Luke Skywalker wants to join the rebel alliance to save the beautiful
princess while thwarting the evil Empire's dominating plans to finish building
a death star by stealing the death star plans so they can blow it up before its
completion, well, that's Luke's A Story arc. And when I tell you our same boy
Luke needs to learn the ways of the Jedi and trust in the mysterious Force to
do it, well, that's Luke's B Story arc.
Take note of two
simple words:
A Story = want.
B Story = need.
Luke WANTS to join
the rebel alliance against the evil Empire.
Luke NEEDS to
learn the ways of the Jedi and gain trust in the mysterious Force.
Three rules exist
when it comes to A Story and B Story:
1. The B Story is
necessary to complete the A Story.
2. The B Story
begins shortly after the A Story starts.
3. The B Story
resolves shortly before the A Story concludes.
As per our Star
Wars: A New Hope example, it goes a little something like this:
1. Luke cannot
make the impossible shot to blow up the death star without trusting in and
using the Force to guide his shot.
2. Luke begins his
Jedi training with Obi Wan after joining the rebel alliance against the evil
Empire who murdered his Aunt and Uncle (and, because of Obi Wan's initial lie
on Tatooine, Luke also believes Darth Vader betrayed and murdered his father).
3. Luke finally
trusts in the Force and uses it to guide his otherwise impossible shot to blow
up the death star.
If you want to
envision it, think of a timeline of numbers 1 through 10. 1 is the very
beginning of your story and 10 is its end. All the numbers between are the
events of adversity your protagonist endures that produces change through
character growth accompanied by lots of action. Now, if A Story starts at 2,
then B Story begins somewhere round 3. And if A story concludes at 9, then B
Story resolves somewhere round 8. Because the B Story is the internal character
arc within A Story's external plot arc.
1. Once upon a
time . . .
2. A Story starts
3. B Story begins
4. Stuff happens
5. More stuff
happens
6. Then even more
stuff happens
7. And even more
stuff, whew
8. B Story
resolves
9. A Story
concludes
10. . . . and they
all lived happily ever after, the end.
Want another
example?
Sure!
Dorothy Gale is
whisked away via tornado from the miserable black-and-white stasis of home she
resents and finds herself in colorful Oz where she believes she and Toto have
made it "over the rainbow" where she'll find true happiness. Only Oz
isn't the wonderful world of cuddly kittens and wet-nosed puppies she'd hoped.
Glinda Goodwitch gifts her a pair of ruby slippers for killing the Wicked Witch
of the East then tells her to skedaddle down the yellow brick road because the
Wicked Witch of the West blames Dorothy for murder and swears cackling revenge.
Dorothy's A Story
is to get the heck out of dangerous Oz and get back home by meeting the Wizard
in Emerald City .
Only problem being
Dorothy doesn't appreciate her home . . . yet. Which is why the ruby slippers
can't work their magic and transport her back home soon as she gets them, only
she doesn't know that . . . also yet.
Until her B Story
comes along via Scarecrow, Lion, and the Tin Man who eventually help her
understand that she already has a home where she is loved.
After Dorothy
melts the Wicked Witch of the West, Glinda Goodwitch appears and informs
Dorothy that she always had the power to return home but she needed to learn it
for herself. B Story resolved through the teaching power of friendship, Dorothy
clicks them ruby heels together while chanting, "There's no place like
home" and is whisked away. She wakes up in her familiar bed, surrounded by
her loved ones and with a new appreciation of home, and thus concludes her A
Story.
Now, just because
the three rules of A & B Stories state that B begins and resolves within
the A doesn't mean there aren't hints and elements of the B Story before the A
Story starts and after it concludes. That just means the purpose of the B Story
is unclear until after the A Story kicks off, because just as the B Story's
resolution is necessary for the A Story's conclusion, so too the A Story is
necessary to catalyze the B Story into active prominence.
Luke Skywalker
longs for a more exciting life, but he's denied by his Aunt and Uncle at every
turn. This presents elements of his B Story before his A Story kicks off, but
without the A Story shoving Luke into high gear by the Empire killing his Aunt
and Uncle he would've continued longing and longing and longing on the farm
without any feasible end.
So what makes a
good B Story and how do you find yours?
Glad you asked!
Here are the ten
most applicable protagonist B Story lessons learned:
1. ACCEPTANCE: of
self, of circumstances, of reality.
2. FAITH: in
oneself, in others, in the world, in God.
3. FEAR:
overcoming it, conquering it, finding courage.
4. FORGIVENESS: of
self or of others.
5. LOVE: includes
self-love, family love, romantic love.
6. REDEMPTION:
including atonement, accepting blame, remorse, and salvation.
7. RESPONSIBILITY:
including duty, standing up for a cause, accepting one's destiny.
8. SELFLESSNESS:
including sacrifice, altruism, heroism, and overcoming greed.
9. SURVIVAL:
including the will to live.
10. TRUST: in
oneself, in others, in the unknown.
These are not all
the B Story lessons, obviously, because people are complicated creatures
possessing a plethora of wants and needs, but they are the ten most prevalent.
And to present the first elements of your B Story just pick one then show don't
tell your protagonist lacking that particular necessary quality (Act 1). Over
the course of their story (Act 2) they learn the true value of it because
experience is the best teacher, then eventually (Act 3) they apply it to their
fullest potential realized through earned character growth.
Let's do one more
example for the sake of filling space.
In First Blood,
drifter and Vietnam War vet John Rambo wanders into town and is accosted then
arrested by the local tough guy Sheriff William Teasle. After suffering some
undeserved abuse, John's fight-or-flight soldier instincts kick in, he punches
his way out of jail and flees into the mountains with the angry Sheriff
swearing vengeance in hot pursuit. John's A Story becomes waging a one-man war
against the local Sheriff and his deputies eager to hunt him down to the bitter
end, because John wants the war to continue. While John's B Story kicks into
gear because what he really needs is to come to grips with the fact that he's
not a soldier any more and the war he brought home with him is over whether he
likes it or not. Eventually he does, John's B Story resolving through his
surrender after a dramatic conversation with Colonel Sam Trautman who pounds
the harsh truth into Rambo's thick skull by yelling, "It's over,
Johnny!", though only after Rambo blows up half the Sheriff's town, then John
surrenders his one-man war and he's taken away into military custody and his A
Story concludes.
So how do you find
your protagonist's Want? Simple. Your protagonist's Want is established through
the Inciting Incident. After the Inciting Incident disrupts your protagonist's
normal world no longer normal in as permanent way as you can make it, their
Want should be clear and concise.
Luke returns home
to find his Aunt and Uncle dead courtesy of the evil Empire. From that moment
forward it's clear Luke WANTS to join the rebel alliance against the Empire and
get revenge. Heck, he even says it out loud to Obi Wan. But he NEEDS to learn
the ways of the Jedi and trust in the mysterious Force he doesn't yet believe
in to do it.
Because Want and
Need are intertwined just like A Story and B Story are intertwined.
One cannot exist
without the other.
As a teenager you
Want your driver's license. But you Need to learn how to drive first.
Simple analogy,
yes, but it works.
As an impatient
writer you Want to be a successful and published author NOW! But you Need to
apply years of patience and discipline so you can learn to write well and
finish that bestseller first.
But let's talk
tragedies for a parting moment.
Maybe you don't
want to write a "happily ever after" story. Okay. I'm a pessimist
too. I'd give you a high-five but you probably have dirty hands and I don't
wanna.
The defining difference between protagonist and antagonist (most times but not always) is
that the protagonist eventually embraces their internal Need but the antagonist
forsakes theirs while clinging to their external Want like grim death.
So have your
tragic protagonist deny their B Story Need to the bitter end, or maybe even
temporarily embrace it only to let it go through returning obsession of their A
Story Want.
Leaving Las
Vegas starring Nicholas Cage is a prime example of a
heart-tugging tragedy. Alcoholic Ben Sanderson Wants to drink himself to death
because his wife left him and his boss fired him and his only remaining friend is
his next bottle. But he Needs to learn to love himself and put the bottle down
for good.
Does he do it?
Of course not!
That's what makes
Leaving Las Vegas a tragedy.
Ben forsakes his B
Story Need to love himself enough to stop drinking and instead embraces his A
Story Want of drinking himself to death.
Imagine if Luke
Skywalker stayed at home instead of joining the rebel alliance, content with
farming.
Or Dorothy Gale
wandered off elsewhere instead of venturing down the yellow brick road to Emerald
City , refusing to see the Wizard.
Or John Rambo
chose suicide over surrender and went out in a blaze of glory.
Or Ben Sanderson
gave up the bottle and turned his life around.
And all because
they eschewed (or in Ben's case embraced) their B Stories.
A Story Want and B
Story Need are the two most important elements of every great story and every
great protagonist.
Without either,
your story and your protagonist have no reason to exist.
Happy Writing!