Happy plotting and writing!
Saturday, January 2, 2021
Did That Really Just Happen? . . . or 30 Dirty Plot Twists to Tickle Your Musing Taint
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Saturday, December 5, 2020
Finding Your Voice . . . or Why You Never Fail Until You Stop Trying
Now read.
And I guarantee you'll know through your tingling Spidey Sense within a few paragraphs if not a few sentences the specific writer's novel you're sampling in your grubby hands.
Because all great writers have found their Voice.
That tasty personal mystery every writer aspires to decipher which separates their intimate narrating wheat from among the mediocre recounting chaff.
No writer 'just finds' their Voice because they've spent a specific number of years writing, or they graduated from Waste-of-Time-and-Money College and own an expensive degree they've paid tens of thousands for declaring them academically brilliant.
Knowledge is power, yes, but wisdom is capability. And the honest triumph of life is you only realize this truth not taught in school but through age because real world experience is the best of all teachers.
If you required heart surgery, would you choose the doctor who spent twenty years in college memorizing every medical textbook but has never performed a single operation, or the doctor with four years of medical school though also has a hundred successful heart surgeries under his or her belt?
Exactly.
Because living life matters.
Remember that the next time your car throws a rod and it comes time to tip the 'dumb' greasemonkey who shirked an expensive education for hands-on garage apprenticeship.
A lot of writers spend their entire lives hunting their elusive Voice. And a lot of writers flounder because they continue relying on everything taught them in school.
Never start a sentence with And or But.
Fragment sentences are bad.
Never end a sentence with a preposition.
Blah blah blah.
“Shut up, Mrs. Shilling! I got it, I got it! I before E except after I shove the C up your nagging butt!”
Sorry.
Eighth Grade flashback.
Too much Black Pyramid in my teens.
Anywho . . . we've had endless grammar rules pounded into our heads since elementary school English, and I'm here to tell you that all of them are obstacles to finding your Voice.
Don't forget the rules, just shelve them while making choice breaks.
Writers without Voice write while concentrating on grammar and facts relevant to the story and the characters involved.
Writers with Voice write without concentrating at all because their Voice is natural, like breathing or blinking, and simply . . . is.
Stop fixating on the beat of your heart and instead focus on the flow of your blood. Relax, and go with the . . . well, flow.
Voice isn't plot or structure or character or how well you can describe them. Voice is passion, and not just passion but your unique twist of it.
Think of an excited child who rushes their parent and in breathless fashion tries to relay a story in all its astonishing details. The parent knows the story is trivial, but to the rejoicing child the story exists as the most wondrous event imaginable. And they practically sweat passion while they stammer and stutter it out.
“Daddy! Daddy! Daddy! This frog, it was big and green and slimy and-and-and I was chasing it while it hopped at the pond to get away and-and-and I almost grabbed it when this bird it squawked real loud then-and-and then . . .”
Passionate painters don't just brush colors to canvas, they bleed their emotions.
Passionate singers don't just shout their songs, they breathe their ballads.
Passionate poets don't just recite their words, they cry loose the burning yearning in their souls.
And passionate writers don't just chronicle fictitious events, we revel in imagination while expressing glorious triumphs and excruciating tragedies of the human spirit.
Writing is art. And the entire point of art is to inspire emotion, to feel—something, anything!
Love.
Hate.
Joy.
Sorrow.
Jealousy.
Doesn't matter.
You know your writing is boring bunk if it elicits no emotional reaction.
Bad writers provoke apathy.
Good writers evoke sympathy.
Great writers inspire empathy.
It really is as simple as that.
Perfect example: when I read a Stephen King novel I feel as if I'm sitting there while he's beside me describing it all through firsthand account. Steve doesn't get all the words 'perfect' or 'right' and that's okay, because he's engaging, and that's what matters most. Stephen King isn't great because he's the 'best' writer (opinions vary, mine among them), he's great because his writing proves intimate and conversational, sometimes calm, sometimes excited, with fluctuating degrees between. But most important it grips me by the fluttery feels and squeezes.
This is why drugs are so addicting.
Drugs induce temporary euphoria.
So do roller coasters.
So do scary movies or tearjerkers.
So does playing with your beloved pet.
Or having a sweaty wrestle with your lover.
Or startling awake from a tossing nightmare in the relieving comfort of your safe bed.
People spend their hard-earned money on and their precious time experiencing the lives of others because of the emotional impact they enjoy in temporary trade.
Professional wrestling is another perfect example. It's absolute crap these days and has been since the early 2,000's, so I'll harken back to the good ol' days of the late 90's when Duane The Rock Johnson and Stone Cold Steve Austin ruled the squared circle.
The great illusion of pro wrestling is the ability of the wrestlers to cast a spell upon you, tricking you into believing they really don't like each other and they really are trying to hurt each other for real reasons. But take that away and what you have left are two sweaty bodybuilders performing acrobatics in a predetermined 'contest' rife with bad acting.
No one cares.
What separates The Rock and Stone Cold from the crap wrestlers of today is that they found their Voice. If you know your WWF history then you know both men floundered before achieving superstar status.
Before he was The Rock, Duane Johnson debuted as Rocky Maivia.
And no one cared.
Before he was Stone Cold, Steve Austin debuted as The Ringmaster.
And no one cared.
Because nothing separated them from among the other wrestlers. They marched to the ring. Performed. Marched away. Repeat as nauseam.
Yawn.
Then one day everyone smelled what The Rock was cooking while giving a Hell Yeah!
Because The Ringmaster found his Voice and became Stone Cold.
And people cared.
Because Rocky Maivia found his Voice and became The Rock.
And people cared.
Finding your writing Voice is a personal journey, and no one can lead you there but you. Which is ironic considering the only one holding you back from finding your Voice is also you.
To toot my arrogant horn, I'm a high school drop-out who's become a #1 best-selling author because I've always applied this universal truth of life no matter how persistent the cold cruel world seeks to crush me underfoot: You never fail until you stop trying.
So keep trying, and good luck.
And remember this proven formula to writing success: (Effort + Perseverance = Results) x (Time + Patience = Voice).
Happy writing!
Saturday, November 7, 2020
Romancing the Bone . . . or the Classic Love Story Subplot Formula
Everyone yearns to love and to be loved. Such is human nature replete in all of us and therefore, so important to story for instigating reader interest, relatable upon the widest emotional scale.
Act 1: boy meets girl
Act 2A: boy gets girl
Midpoint: boy and girl have sex (or 'first kiss' for the kiddies)
Act 2B: boy loses girl
Act 3: boy gets girl back
Now let us reflect upon the classic essential minimum Basic 7 plot points all great stories possess for ease of reference:
1. Inciting Incident
2. Plot Turn 1
3. Pinch Point
4. Midpoint
5. Punch Point
6. Plot Turn 2
7. Resolution
Next we add that tasty opening Hook all readers enjoy to yank them into your story begging for more, as well we apply them to their appropriate Acts:
Act 1: Hook, Inciting Incident, Plot Turn 1
Act 2A: Pinch Point, Midpoint
Act 2B: Punch Point, Plot Turn 2
Act 3: Resolution
Then we apply a little more detail to flesh out the specific Love Story subplot while expanding upon the Basic 7 into the Lovely 9 thusly:
Act 1: Hook, Inciting Incident, Plot Turn 1
Act 2A: Pinch Point
Act 2 Breaker: Midpoint*
Act 2B Punch Point, Plot Turn 2
Act 3: Climax, Resolution
*NOTE: we've appointed the Midpoint its own category because of how important it is to the developing relationship of the Love Story as well its impact upon the characters involved. We've also added Climax before the Resolution, separating it also because of its importance.
So how to extrapolate upon the Love Story to fit your novel as its intriguing subplot? Like so:
-ACT 1-
Hook: introduce the Protagonist incomplete without love.
Inciting Incident: introduce Love Interest to Protagonist while establishing clear conflict between them.
Plot Turn 1: Protagonist and Love Interest are forced to work together toward a common goal.
-ACT 2A-
Pinch Point: hidden mutual attraction evolves into obvious sexual tension as they discover things in common while working together.
-MIDPOINT-
Breaker: they surrender to their surmounting sexual tensions and have sex, irrevocably binding them while raising the stakes not only of their relationship but also its influence upon the main story goal foreboding the shift of priorities.
-ACT 2B-
Punch Point: but their relationship jeopardizes achieving the main story goal so that the Protagonist breaks it off.
Plot Turn 2: until the despairing Protagonist realizes he can't live without her and their relationship takes precedence over achieving the main story goal.
-ACT 3-
Climax: so he risks all to win back the Love Interest in a daring display and declaration of their flourishing love which the Love Interest reciprocates (often at the cost of some personal sacrifice to the Protagonist as proof of his undying love).
Resolution: until they're together again, and their repaired relationship is stronger after enduring the adversity of their tested love.
**ALSO NOTE: this is not the only Love Interest subplot formula, obviously and because humans are complicated creatures of complex emotions, just the most simple and common. Often, such as with plenty of superhero movies, the Punch Point is instead the Protagonist realizing the Love Interest's life is in increasing danger if they remain together so he breaks their relationship off for the sake of sparing the Love Interest's life. But the Antagonist proves crafty and figures out this Protagonist weakness of heart then kidnaps the Love Interest with the intent of luring the Protagonist in for a final battle, using the Love Interest as bait (such is the classic, repeating tale of older comic books). So the Plot Turn 2 of this version then becomes the Protagonist learning of the Love Interest's kidnapping. The Climax becomes the rescue alongside the Antagonist's defeat. The Resolution is obvious: Protagonist and Love Interest together again and stronger for it all.
I'll use the bare bones of my MASTER PLOT FORMULA as example of this typical superhero Love Story subplot:
-ACT 1-
Old World Stasis: introduce incomplete-without-love Protagonist.
New World Flux: complete-opposites Protagonist and Love Interest are forced to work together.
-ACT 2A-
Things Come Together: their mutual attractions flourish into sexual tensions while they discover things in common.
False Victory: they surrender to sex.
-ACT 2B-
Things Fall Apart: fearing for Love Interest's endangered life, Protagonist ends their relationship.
False Defeat: Antagonist kidnaps Love Interest, baiting the trap to kill the Protagonist.
-ACT 3-
False Solution: Protagonist risks all rescuing Love Interest.
True Resolution: Protagonist validates his love by proving the importance of their relationship at the cost of some personal sacrifice to himself, and the Love Interest reciprocates their affections.
***ALSO-ALSO NOTE: but they don't have to hate each other right off the bat, either. The Protagonist can pine after the Love Interest from afar . . . until one day they get the opportunity to work alongside them . . . then later their relationship interferes with the main story goal so the Love Interest breaks their relationship off but ends up floundering without the Protagonist while the despairing Protagonist only wants her back . . . then they end up reuniting after some risk-alls and declarations of love and blah blah blah, you get the sappy point.
There exists a million and one ways to tweak the Classic Love Story Subplot Formula. You're a writer--be creative! And we're not finished yet, so suck in that pouty lower lip, because here's two more ways aplenty to employ the Love Story be it subplot or as the main focus:
Billy Mernit (considered the leading expert on romantic comedies; a.k.a. the guru of rom-com; MFA, screenwriter and novelist; WGA member and story analyst for Universal Pictures) defines his seven essential basic romantic comedy beats in his book 'Writing the Romantic Comedy' as follows:
1. The Chemical Equation: Setup
A scene or sequence identifying the exterior and/or interior conflict (i.e. unfulfilled desire), the “what’s wrong with this picture” implied in the protagonist’s (and/or the antagonist’s) current status quo.
2. Cute Meet: The Catalyst
The inciting incident that brings man and woman (or man and man or woman and woman) together and into conflict; an inventive but credible contrivance, often amusing, which in some way sets the tone for the action to come.
3. A Sexy Complication: Turning Point
Traditionally occurring at the end of Act 1, a new development that raises story stakes and clearly defines the protagonist’s goal; most successful when it sets man and woman at cross-purposes and/or their inner emotions at odds with the goal.
4. The Hook: Midpoint
A situation that irrevocably binds the protagonist with the antagonist (often while tweaking sexual tensions) and has further implications for the outcome of the relationship.
5. Swivel: Second Turning Point
Traditionally occurring at the end of Act 2, stakes reach their highest point as the romantic relationship’s importance jeopardizes the protagonist’s chance to succeed at his (or her) stated goad–or vice versa–and his (or her) goal shifts.
6. The Dark Moment: Crisis Climax
Wherein the consequences of the Swivel decision yield disaster; generally, the humiliating scene where private motivations are revealed, and either the relationship and/or the protagonist’s goal is seemingly lost forever.
7. Joyful Defeat: Resolution
A reconciliation that reaffirms the primal importance of the relationship; usually a happy ending that implies marriage or a serious commitment, often at the cost of some personal sacrifice to the protagonist.
When Harry Met Sally pioneered this simple yet effective format in 1989, and it worked so well that it became its own genre. One could argue that no rom-com since proven able to top the iconic hilarity of Meg Ryan’s fake orgasm, capped perfectly with, “I’ll have what she’s having.”
This rom-com template has remained essentially the same since 1989 because it's the proven tried-and-true recipe for a successful rom-com as follows:
1. Start with two people who could potentially be attracted to each other.
2. Put them in a scenario where they are likely to hate each other at first.
3. Provide them time to slowly grow on each other through burgeoning conflict as well shared interests.
4. Sprinkle in some quirky best friends, coworkers and family members who either push them closer together or pull them apart.
5. Include sharp writing and commentary on modern dating/relationships.
6. Add a wedge in their blossoming romance that forces them to rethink their interest in the other person.
7. Finally, bring on the big romantic gesture that ensures they will live happily ever after, at least until the end credits role or the last page turns.
And there you have it, multiple worthy versions of the Classic Love Story Subplot Formula ready for you to apply your creative writerly genius then inject them into your story either as the subplot or the main plot itself.
Saturday, October 3, 2020
Booger Teeth . . . or Nine Basic Plots For You To Pick And Chew On
In Climaxing the Midpoint, we dipped our left big toe just a shy into the waters of Christopher Booker’s Seven Basic Plots with the following summation:
1. Overcoming the Monster: The (good) protagonist sets out to defeat the (evil) antagonist force which threatens the protagonist and/or their homeland.
2. Rags to Riches: The poor protagonist acquires power, wealth, and/or a mate, loses it all and gains it back, growing into a changed and wiser person as a result.
3. The Quest: The protagonist and companions set out to acquire an important object or to get to a location while facing temptations and other obstacles along the way.
4. Voyage and Return: The protagonist goes to a strange land and, after overcoming the threats it poses to them, they return with experience.
5. Comedy: Light and humorous character with a happy or cheerful ending; a dramatic work in which the central motif is the triumph over adverse circumstance, resulting in a successful or happy conclusion. Though comedy is more than humor. It refers to a pattern where the conflict becomes more and more confusing, but is at last made plain in a single clarifying event. The majority of romance films fall into this category.
6. Tragedy: The protagonist’s character flaw or great mistake which is their undoing. Their unfortunate end evokes pity at their folly and the fall of a fundamentally good character.
7. Rebirth: An event forces the main character to change their ways and often become a better person.
Booker’s Seven Basic Plots are further simplified as follows:
1. Overcoming the Monster = hero and the bad guy.
2. Rags to Riches = success and crisis.
3. The Quest = seeking and finding.
4. Voyage and Return = boldly exploring.
5. Comedy = from confusion to enlightenment.
6. Tragedy = the price of fatal flaws.
7. Rebirth = finding the personal light.
*as well across these basic seven plots there is also Booker’s meta-plot, which is a five-stage plot structure of common elements.
But in actuality we left two more of his plots lounging lazy on the warm beach behind us, forgotten, because Christopher Booker proclaimed nine, not seven, basic plots, the last two of which are:
8. Mystery: An outsider to some horrendous event or drama (such as a murder) strives to discover the truth of what happened.
And . . .
9. Rebellion Against The One Above All: A hero rebels against the all-powerful entity who controls the world (or kingdom or nation or corporation or family or what have you) until said entity, The One Above All, is forced to surrender their power through submission, attrition, or death.
I’ll explain why Christopher prefers only seven of these basic nine later. For now let’s say screw the beach, dive in headfirst and explore the undersea wonderment of Booker’s Seven Basic Plots in all their detailed glory.
1. OVERCOMING THE MONSTER: (The protagonist sets out to defeat an antagonistic force—often evil—which threatens the protagonist and/or the protagonist’s homeland.)
Overcoming the Monster stories involve a hero who must destroy a monster (or villain) threatening the community. Usually the decisive fight occurs in the monster’s lair, and usually the hero possesses a rare magical weapon and/or unique ability at his disposal. Sometimes the monster guards a treasure or holds a Princess captive, which the hero escapes with in the end.
-Act 1-
Anticipation: the threat of the monster becomes known.
-Initial Driver-
The Call: the hero is called upon to confront the monster.
-Act 2-
Dream: all begins well as the hero prepares to face the monster or journeys to confront it.
-Act 3-
Frustration: coming face to face with the monster, the hero appears to be outmatched.
-Act 4-
Nightmare: the final battle with the monster, which seems hopeless for the hero.
-Final Driver-
Resolution: hero overthrows the monster, escapes (possibly with a treasure of Princess), and gains a new kingdom.
*Examples of OVERCOMING THE MONSTER Basic Plot include: Jaws, James Bond films, Beowulf.
2. RAGS TO RICHES: (The poor protagonist acquires power, wealth, and/or a mate, then loses it all and gains it back while growing as a person as a result.)
The Rags to Riches plot involves a hero who seems quite commonplace, poor, downtrodden, and miserable though possesses such potential for greatness. The story shows how he manages to fulfill his potential and becomes someone of wealth, importance, success and happiness.
-Act 1-
Initial Wretchedness. We see the hero in a humble, unhappy state.
-Initial Driver-
The Call: the hero is called into the wider world.
-Act 2-
Out Into the World: the hero enjoys initial success, gets a taste of higher status, possibly meets their true love (who is someone previously above them).
-Act 3-
Central Crisis: everything goes wrong; the hero is separated from their true love.
-Act 4-
-Final Driver-
Resolution: hero wins his true love and obtains a permanent higher status.
*Examples of RAGS TO RICHES Basic Plot include: Rocky, Cinderella, Aladdin, Great Expectations.
**Though as with many of the basic plots, there exist variations on Rags to Riches proving less upbeat:
Variation 1: FAILURE - What Christopher Booker calls the “dark” version of this story is when the hero fails to win in the end, usually because he sought to attain wealth and status for selfish reasons.
Variation 2: HOLLOW VICTORY - Christopher Booker’s second variation are stories where the hero “may actually achieve his goals, but only in a way which is hollow and brings frustration because he again has sought them only in an outward and egocentric fashion.” Another way to describe this would be a comi-tragic ending or personal failure; an outcome of success but a judgment of failure because the hero fails to resolve his inner conflict.
3. THE QUEST: (The protagonist and companions set out to acquire an important object or to achieve a specific location while facing temptations and braving other obstacles along the harrowing journey.)
The Quest stories involve a hero who embarks on a journey to obtain a great prize that is located far away.
-Act 1-
Story begins in a ‘city of destruction’ where life is intolerable or oppressive.
-Initial Driver-
The hero receives a vision or supernatural call that says the key to making things better is to go get something from far away.
-Act 2-
The Journey: hero travels to the goal, having adventures along the way, gaining helpers and encountering monsters, temptations, dangers, and the ghosts of failed questers.
-Act 3-
Arrival and Frustration: within sight of his goal, the hero finds another terrible set of obstacles to overcome.
-Act 4-
Final Ordeals: hero faces a final set of tests as well his toughest fight yet.
-Final Driver-
The Goal: hero survives and obtains the treasure, Princess, kingdom, etc . . . forever more.
*Examples of THE QUEST Basic Plot include: Raiders of the Lost Ark, Lord of the Rings (though here the goal is Losing rather than Obtaining the treasure), Monty Python and the Holy Grail.
4. VOYAGE AND RETURN: (The protagonist ventures to a strange land and, after overcoming the threats it poses or learning important lessons unique to that location, they return with experience.)
Voyage and Return stories feature a hero who journeys to a foreign world that at first seems strange but enchanting. Eventually, the hero comes to feel threatened and trapped in this world and must make a thrilling escape back to the safety of his home world. In some cases, the hero learns and grows as a result of his adventure. In others he does not, and consequently leaves behind in the other world his true love, or other opportunity for happiness.
-Act 1-
We see a hero who is bored, curious, reckless, or otherwise open to a new experience.
-Initial Driver-
Hero is transported to a strange new world without warning.
-Act 2-
Dream: hero explores the new world, finding it puzzling but fascinating.
-Act 3-
Frustration: gradually, the world becomes alarming, frustrating, oppressive, or difficult.
-Act 4-
Nightmare: a serious threat to the hero’s survival arises.
-Final Driver-
Thrilling escape and return.
*Examples of VOYAGE AND RETURN Basic Plot include: The Wizard of Oz, Back to the Future, The Lion King.
5. COMEDY: (Light and humorous character with a happy or cheerful ending; a dramatic work in which the central motif is the triumph over adverse circumstance, resulting in a successful or happy conclusion. Booker stresses that comedy is more than humor. It refers to a pattern where the conflict grows more confusing though is at last made plain in a single clarifying event. The majority of romance films fall into this category.)
Here’s where things become confusing because Comedy is defined in three ways:
1. As any story that ends happily, meaning the story goal is obtained and the main character resolves their inner conflict to satisfying conclusion.
Or a story which is still humorous or satirical while leading to two other (and often ironic) conclusions:
2. the main character resolves their inner conflict but without obtaining their story goal.
3. the main character achieves their story goal but without resolving their inner conflict.
*The latter two options are the common Tragedy result, for all Comedies, with their humor removed, are Tragedies. The second option is less tragic despite the story’s goal unresolved because the main character resolves their inner conflict, while the third option punctuates truer tragedy with unresolved inner conflict despite the story goal resolved.
Though of course an abysmal fourth option exists, one of conclusive tragedy (see below: 6. Tragedy), that of the main character failing to resolve both their story goal and inner conflict, but such is the rarest case when applied to a protagonist and is most often displayed through the antagonist as the tragic result of their refusal of character growth and steadfast obsession in contrasting opposition to the protagonist’s contradicting example of character.
Romantic Comedy presents a drama about finding true love (most often new, young lovers), and traditionally end in marriage.
Booker makes a valiant attempt at a better definition of comedy, but he refrains from applying the same plot structure to it as with the other basic plots. Instead, he loosely defines Comedy in terms of three stages:
1. The story takes place in a community where the relationships between people (and by implication true love and understanding) are under the shadow of confusion, uncertainty, and frustration. Sometimes this is caused by an oppressive or self-centered person, sometimes by the hero acting in such a way, or sometimes through no one’s fault.
2. The confusion worsens until it reaches a crisis.
3. The truth comes out, perceptions are changed, and the relationships are healed in love and understanding (and typically marriage for the hero).
*Examples of COMEDY Basic Plot include: The Naked Gun, A Midsummer Night’s Dream, The Big Lebowski, Life of Brian, Bridget Jones’s Diary, Four Weddings and a Funeral, When Harry Met Sally, Airplane!, Blazing Saddles.
6. TRAGEDY: (The protagonist is a hero with a major character flaw or great mistake which is ultimately their undoing. Their unfortunate end evokes pity at their folly and the fall of a fundamentally good character.)
Tragedy, along with Comedy, is usually defined by its ending, which makes these two unlike the other basic plots. A tragedy is a story in which the main story goal is not achieved as well the hero does not resolve his inner conflict happily.
Booker’s description of this plot is close to that of the classic tragedies (Greek, Roman, or Shakespearean).
-Act 1-
Anticipation: we start with a hero who is unfulfilled and wants more.
-Initial Driver-
Temptation: the hero finds focus in some object or desire or course of action (usually something forbidden).
-Act 2-
Dream: the hero commits to his goal and things go amazingly well for him.
-Act 3-
Frustration: gradually, things start to go wrong and the hero may resort to desperate and unwise actions that cannot be undone.
-Act 4-
Nightmare: hero loses control of the situation; forces of opposition close in on him.
-Final Driver-
Hero is destroyed in some way.
*Examples of TRAGEDY Basic Plot include: Romeo and Juliet, Anna Karenina, Citizen Kane.
7. REBIRTH: (An event forces the main character to change their ways and often become a better individual.)
Rebirth stories show a hero (often a heroine) who is trapped in a living death by a dark power or villain until she is freed by another character’s loving act. As with Comedy, Booker’s outline of this plot is sketchy.
One of the big problems with this plot is that the hero does not solve his own problem but must be rescued by someone else, and therefore can avoid resolving his inner conflict. Which is why many modern women dislike classic fairy tales: because the heroines are so passive and helpless.
-Act 1-
Hero or heroine falls under the shadow of the Dark Power.
-Act 2-
Things seem to go well at first, and the threat seems to recede.
-Act 3-
Threat returns in full force, imprisoning the hero in a state of living death.
-Act 4-
The Dark Power seems to completely triumph.
-Final Driver-
Someone miraculously rescues the hero.
*Examples of REBIRTH Basic Plot include: Pride and Prejudice, A Christmas Carol, Beauty and the Beast.
And here we are, boils and ghouls . . . the two additional basic plots Christopher Booker dislikes while viewing them as inferior, because they are less about the main character embracing his feminine side:
8. MYSTERY: (An outsider to some horrendous event or drama, such as murder, strives to discover the truth of what happened.)
-Note: Christopher provided no detailed breakdown for this basic plot (though I delve into much greater detail about the Murder Mystery plot and all it entails in my previous post: Anonymous Christie).
Booker dislikes Mysteries because the detective or investigator often has no personal connection to the characters he’s interviewing or the crime he’s investigating. Therefore, Booker argues, the detective possesses no inner conflict to resolve but for the outer plot itself.
Which may be true
of many Mysteries, including plenty by Sir Arthur Conan Doyle or Agatha
Christie. However, in other Mystery stories the detective harbors a personal
stake in the plot, which gives rise to inner conflict—often a moral dilemma.
For example:
Nonetheless, it is true that Mysteries often do not leave one with the sense that the world is totally healed (after all, innocent victims are still dead). This sets it apart from most of the basic stories—with the exception perhaps of Tragedy.
*Often what is being investigated in a Mystery is a story based on one of the other plots.
**Examples of
MYSTERY Basic Plot include: And Then There Were None, The Big Sleep, Gone Girl,
The Postman Always Rings Twice, In Cold Blood, The Da Vinci Code, The Girl With
the Dragon Tattoo, The Silence of the Lambs,
9. REBELLION AGAINST THE ONE ABOVE ALL: (A hero rebels against the all-powerful entity who controls the world ((or kingdom or nation or corporation or family or what have you)) until said entity, The One Above All, is forced to surrender their power through submission, attrition, or death.)
The hero is a solitary figure who initially feels The One Above All is at fault and that he must preserve his independence or refusal to submit. Eventually, he is faced with the One’s awesome power and submits, becoming part of the rest of the world again.
In some versions, The One Above All is portrayed as benevolent, as in the story of Job, while in others the reader is left convinced it is malevolent, as in 1984 or Brazil. These darker versions seem to be what make Booker less than keen on this basic plot.
Though Booker doesn’t mention it, a common variation is to have the hero refuse to submit and essentially win against the power of The One Above All. In The Prisoner, the hero eventually earns the right to discover that The One Above All is a twisted version of himself, after which he is set free. In The Matrix, Neo’s resistance eventually leads to a better world. Another example is The Hunger Games series, where Katniss’s continued rebellion eventually leads to the downfall of both the original tyrant and his potential successor, resulting in a freer world.
*Examples of REBELLION AGAINST THE ONE ABOVE ALL Basic Plot include: The Matrix, Les Miserables, They Live, Spartacus, V for Vendetta, Red Dawn, The Patriot, Lawrence of Arabia, Star Wars: A New Hope, Braveheart.
Take note of the five key similarities (though he sometimes uses different names for Act descriptions or even no names at all, depending upon the particular plot) recurring within all of Christopher Booker’s suggested basic plots which, when you strip everything else of unique value away, leaves us with his skeletal meta-plot.
This meta-plot begins with the Anticipation Stage (punctuated by the Initial Driver) in which the hero is called to the awaiting adventure. This is followed by a Dream Stage in which the adventure begins, the hero experiences some success, and thus earns an illusion of invincibility. However, this is then followed by a Frustration Stage in which the hero endures his first confrontation with the true enemy, and the illusion of invincibility is lost. This worsens in the Nightmare Stage, which provides the climax of the plot, wherein hope is apparently lost. Finally, in the Resolution Stage, the hero overcomes his burden against the odds (punctuated by the Final Driver).
1. Anticipation: the flawed hero is called to the awaiting adventure.
2. Dream: the adventure begins, and the ignorant hero achieves some success as well gains the illusion of invincibility.
3. Frustration: the hero experiences their first devastating confrontation with the true enemy to which the illusion of invincibility shatters to vulnerability.
4. Nightmare: the failing hero’s disclosing vulnerability worsens to fragile exposure, climaxing the plot, wherein all hope is apparently lost.
5. Resolution: until the rallying hero overcomes his flaw through change and triumphs against all odds through their full potential.
*though obviously there lives darker variation here within Booker's meta-plot; see 6. Tragedy above)
The key thesis of Christopher Booker’s book (The Seven Basic Plots: Why We Tell Stories) is as follows:
“However many characters may appear in a story, its real concern is with just one: its hero. It is the one whose fate we identify with, as we see them gradually developing towards that state of self-realization which marks the end of the story. Ultimately it is in relation to this central figure that all other characters in a story take on their significance. What each of the other characters represents is really only some aspect of the inner state of the hero himself.”
Happy plotting and happy writing!
Saturday, September 5, 2020
Anonymous Christie . . . or the Classic 12-Chapter Murder Mystery Formula
Sure you did.
--A hero must be colorful. He must have an occupation that is colorful or he must be a colorful person. In general, I have followed the theory that a regular policeman or detective is not colorful. Just think a moment about the greatest detective in all detective fiction - Sherlock Holmes - and you will quickly grasp what I mean by colorful.
--This, to me, is the most important element of any mystery story plot. By theme I mean subject matter, what the story is about in addition to, over and above, the ACTUAL MURDER plot.
--Let's face it, the hero of detective fiction is a Superman. The villain must therefore be a super-Superman or have plenty of assistants. The odds must ALWAYS be against the hero.
--The story must be played against a colorful or unusual background. The streets of a big city are not necessarily colorful. If they're not, make them so.
--Here again, the “unusual” should be considered. Shooting, stabbing, etc. are acceptable, but the circumstances surrounding them should be “unusual.”
--Actually, there are only two reasons for murder - hate and greed, but there are many subdivisions of these and the motive should be as unusual as possible.
--Somewhere in the story there must be a clue for the alert reader. Sure, try to fool the reader, but the clue must be there if the reader should want to check back on you after the story is over.
--In the grand finale, when all seems lost, when the hero cannot possibly win out, he must snatch victory from apparent defeat. By a trick . . . and here the word “unusual” applies.
--The story must have pace and movement. It must not consist of talk, talk, talk, about the missing button, etc.
--A grand, smashing climax is necessary. Unusual.
--The hero should be personally involved in some manner. He should be doing this over and beyond the simple call of duty, or beyond the money paid him for doing it.”
My beautiful baby daughter Jenna Androsac is gonna be 17 this March 30th! She's so pretty and so smart, I'm so proud of her!
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